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Old 01-05-07, 04:05 PM   #10
TEF
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You’re a computer freak, & you’re the only one fat here,
How do you have a 9-8 record…
And you’ve been into text battling since that year,
LOL
So don’t bother droppin, cuz all your verses be suckin to me,
We don’t argue that your not the best out, since you suck IN the league,
IT’S NOT GREAT BUT OK
Your queer man, and your not smart, & your face? I bend all,
Don’t think you have a great mind just because you like your mental,
I LIKE THE WORDPLAY
See truly I hate you, that’s why against me you’ll hit the floor fast,
See you got off on the wrong foot, my other one’s still up your ass,
WHOA

Vs

NOTHING

VOTE APEX

The problem with Cris’s lines is none of them really stood out to me. Accouple of them was just Jokes that fell flat somewhere. The opener was waaay too stretched. I almost quoted the “Linen of your Jeans” thing but the way you worded it just wasn’t good e-nuff to me. Oh and don’t center the verse, that’s just gay. Apex wins off having better personals and insults that had more of a sting to it
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