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Old 01-05-07, 08:51 PM   #10
GREVISS
Flyweight
 
Posts: 112
IP:

It hurts son, to notice that you're fucking terrible, but you aint the first one
You're an afterthought. & afterthought, I realized you weren't even worth one
this ain't an insult to the league, and you wont get under feebles skin
you somehow managed 3 losses, in a league there's only 3 good people in

VS

You being nice is false, n’ you need to let every1 know, just confess
That ur not good n’ your steps to being dope..
…. involves a needle, belt n’ being homeless



feebs the RV concept ive seen a couple times before which says alot
since ive only been here a couple weeks, but the after thought line
was real creative , i liked it , while the second quotable was ight,
cos i see the top heads around here speakin on that subject , while
black ya quoteable was descent as well tho i wasnt feelin most of
your verse cos i felt the concepts needed to be flipped really well
for them to work as most of them have been done,

V/feeb
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