cant say i enjoyed this to much as the whole concept has been done to death
you got skills no doubt, but i like the text to have some imagery and something
that can test the intellect, this was typical of the selfglory type gun play scripts
and although i do enjoy that in audio, in text you have to work with a lot more
components for it to be effective, id suggest tryin to rip a fresher deeper or more
thought provoking topic up, something with a message or just something that
youve thought about and you know other peeps could relate to, like is said i
can see some talent but yerr... nuff said...stay up