your opener was good though i thought you shoud have stayed
on that path, cos for me it just started to get a little to random
through out the verse, and the sasquatch thing, i really was
not feelin that, other than that ya flow and such was pretty
descent, while i dont feel like there was an obvious message
behind this as i thought the ending was to sharp, and just
didnt give a satisfying finisher, overall i think it sill needs a
lil more work , no hate... be easy...peace