Fuckin' cunt, I'm sure ur boys will hit this up later
U have such a Big Unit of dickriders, they could pitch in the majors
Lets talk WBL. Advertisin' that shit league here? Fuck you
I'll make ur roster so Razor thin, Gillette blades could cut u
That rec's fake with joke wins, ur fat n' a queer
U've Garner'd so many no-shows, u embarass Jennifer's acting career

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In a concept flipping battle? honestly, the irony in this is worth it D.
Cuz when it comes to flippin concepts, you've got mine down.. PERFECTLY.
The league SUCKS witout kemp, but you're still likely to brag.
Even tho the wackness has doubled..
... kinda like your top punches since you started writing the mag.
Remember the sidewalk game? kinda annoying in fact.
I dunno if she's superstitious..
.. but from the looks of you.. ya mom shoulda avoided the crack.
Lmao, old concept but nice flip
I keep the halloween theme with my guns and my rappin' patern.
So trust me mother fucker. this pumpkin light you up like a jackolantern.

Hen's 2nd bar was the same concept at the 1st so it doesnt hit as hard. Da Da and Number row bars were pretty stupid imo. sorry lol the rest of ya verse wasnt bad. a few mediocrew as well as some hard hitting punches. Trus didnt have any amazing quotables but stayed pretty consistent. Your wording seems to take away from the effectiveness of some of your punches though. so, even though you were consistent, not much really hit hard enough to quote

v/ Hens

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