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Old 01-06-07, 02:36 AM   #12
Te Ora
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Around the league they'll see you get clowned by feebs, this mops known...
I'll give ya girl military knowledge when I use her face as my drop zone
It hurts son, to notice that you're fucking terrible, but you aint the first one
You're an afterthought. & afterthought, I realized you weren't even worth one

vs.

nothing

.. blacks verse wasn't terrible, just didn't have any thing i thought was reaally worthy of being quoted. feebs 'afterthought' bar was the punch of the battle. i thought his 'drop zone' one was a nice flip on that sort of thing, haven't seen it done in that way before.

v/ feeble

would appreciate it if both of you voted on the punchline league final once it's up. thnx.
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