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Old 01-06-07, 07:50 PM   #14
John Hensley.
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Around the league they'll see you get clowned by feebs, this mops known...
I'll give ya girl military knowledge when I use her face as my drop zone
It hurts son, to notice that you're fucking terrible, but you aint the first one
You're an afterthought. & afterthought, I realized you weren't even worth one
this ain't an insult to the league, and you wont get under feebles skin
you somehow managed 3 losses, in a league there's only 3 good people in



vs.

The word is that’s feebs has feel off, well we’ll just wait n’ see
But the drought will come to past..
… after we finish putting back the dirt on your body


vote feeble, he pretty much dropped enough to win this. i liked the afterthought line, was worded well. other lines i quoted were solid. wtf@ the rv line tho come on now. Black dropped ok, you have a good structure man, but just didnt execute here.
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