not a bad battle here. i was going to break it down line by line but decided i'd just read it and write about it. Anyways, Stanza, your wording is pretty much killing you here, your lines are mad stretched and they drag the concepts out too much. Tef, you dropped a couple concepts i've seen before like the WAC line and the state of mind, but regardless of that your wording and execution was still better here. I have Tef taking this one here, slightly harder hitting punches and alot better wording.

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