hmmm.....quality is def better, likin this beat. sound like some freestyle type ish. ok, ya flow, sure it's on point, but it's very simplistic. need some kinda change in the rhyme scheme cuz after a while it gets boring n repetitive. u got a good voice for rappin tho, i see u got the monotone thing goin on but could still use some more emotion. chorus aint bad but needs better mixing cuz at first i couldnt even tell it was the hook.

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