Aight...i liked the concept you used but i dunno don't think it sounds like hip hop imo...think you could say it's still in it's final fantasy format you didnt successfully flip it into a hott hip hop beat....but still drum work was hott...just think the sample flippin let you down....but that was a good drop....1
Oh and RTF please on:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239062