On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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aight i'm peepin now
iono the flow was off in more then a few spots....lyrics were okay u need to write um longer so they flow better wit the beat cuz it kinda seems chopped up.....voice is straight....emotion is aight.....and the delivery is ehh
Iono you could have potentail just polish up that flow a lil
i def. am feelin me and limited editions edition better
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