you know i got my radio show... im playin this on air as i critique.... here
beat is familiar.... you comin with lack luster energy... but its all good... it picks up... almost like you havent mastered the words of the track yet... you read it through a few times... not really polished for delivery at all.... but the hook comes in.... its aight... you got swag its juss a lil wild... haha... i can most defff see the potential... lil like Pac on the 2nd verse... for like 4 bars then it got a lil sloppy again... but the story is followed.
pretty solid joint... you deff got some serious potential ...
7./10
keep at it mayne
ps.... if you got any more audio you want aired out on the Radio show Live every Sunday night @ 7pm-9pmEST... send your tracks to :
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-Don Tito Bronsky