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Old 01-10-07, 10:38 PM   #9
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
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i like the way yall structered the verses...its ill, i really like this, is this a fabo beat.....sounds like it, but i love the flows n quality on both....pretty ill song....not much advise i could give on this one....rtf on I Try tho....
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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