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Old 01-12-07, 12:45 PM   #3
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first off i gotta say i love this original song. my dad used to knock this song back in the day..

Q - comes in voice sounds a little weird in this song. i like the flow switch ups. keeps it inte3resting. lyrically this is pretty good.

hook - kinda cool..maybe add something a little more with the adlibs.

Ike - your voice sounds real good with this track..lyrics are good on this. likin the flow as well.


actually a pretty good song..just the end seems real empty. maybe you coulda added something. like some talking. good job guys.

ayo i got this track im working with that i think yall would sound good on, so get at me if you wanna get on it.
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