Alright..

Nice vocals, the singing is most definitly hot..nice chorus. The beat is a nice chill vibed style..

You definitly got some kind of editing over your vocals, either that or distortion was left over from the microphone. The flow is nice and slow, not really my style, but it fits nice over this beat and feel for the song.

Second flow is decent, nice variation and lyrics are basic, but with the way he is flowing it will be hard for people enjoying the song to really focus on his lyrics. Unlike the first guy who's lyrics definitly stick out more because of his slow style..

Back to the first style, and it's a nice outing to this song...

For sure, this song is definitly nice, I like the vibe of this song. Props on ya song fam..

RTF. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239278