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Old 01-12-07, 02:03 PM   #8
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Nice beat...and real nice quality...

The first flow is nice, and fits the beat perfectly, caring emotion where it needs to be. Lyrics are nice in some places but off position in others..

The chorus, seems to be doubled too much, causing an over effect ..but the lyrics to it are nice.

Second verse, flow is decent, but your emotion falls off at certain parts...still the second verse hit pretty hard.

Chorus again..

Third verse has seem feel as the other ones, not much diffrent here, except the lyrics but the concept is all the same.

Decent track here, nice production and quality on this. You should feel lucky to have the nice equipment to use man. Nice track and keep droppin.

RTF. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239278
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