Your quality is decent, and this beat sounds nice..reminds me of some up to date west coast snoop dogg (doggystyle) shit..

First verse, was a good flow with no flaw to what I can hear..went really well over the beat with a good tempo. Lyrics are decent..

Chorus, pretty original, and it has a good feel towards the song, probably the best part of the song..

Second verse..beyond your truthful cerium, it had basically the same flow as the first one. Pretty much same critiques that I gave on the first verse.

Chorus Again...definitly like the "On and On and On.." part..

Third verse, same flow all the way through the song. I was definitly looking for some kind of transitions through it. It took a little away from the song..

Basically besides the lack of transitions, this song had a good feel and decent direction to it. I liked it...keep dropping tight tracks.

RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239278