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your flow is def on point. u're a rapper and thats all there is to it. All i can critique u on is lyrics. I dont feel like u're being yourself in this song, more like u tryin to convince ppl you're cool. Espically by tellin ppl what you're not. I mean if u dont sell drugs or is ghetto or watever, just dont mention it. I've heard way too many ppl say they ain't a thug, but i'm still hard and shit. Forget that, just start getting deeper with your lyrics, and talk about subjects ppl can appeal to. Even if u do rap and ain't a husstla.
Keep up the good work man.
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