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Old 01-13-07, 01:02 AM   #9
Twisted Visions
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Voted For: RaI$Ed

Rai$ed

im suprised you showed usually you quick to run
dont need a pissed off child to see the bitching son
-Nothing to special, basic 2/5
you re lines are horrible, they are past just weak
ran is defining illness, getting the dictionary as we speak.
-ha, thought that was pretty funny, nice 4/5
ran- sum thing ill out of your mouth just cant be said
ill show youre the pussy on this site like an eye candy thread..
-A little bland, no punch or personal, like filler 2/5
no artist wants you on their feature like a pimpl on top of their face
the last time you posted sumthing ill is when you copied and past
-Good closer, ended with a personal/punch combo 4/5

Total:12/20

Ransum

beef?
thats cool cuz i got mines the cocked nine,
stay on the corner like stop signs giveing out work so fumbling a pack only way i drop dimes
-Multi's were kinda forced, weak opener 2/5
why u trying to out-mines?, i'll leave u outlined
and if u husstling that YA~! u'll end up like a blank sheet of paper without-lines
-end up like a blank sheet of paper without-lines<--Best line 3/5
i spit hot flames dont get caught in the blaze,
ya pap's must be a prist cuz u knew u'll get taken advantage of... guess thats how you was RaI$Ed
-Weak stretched line 1/5
ya days up like calender on the ceiling, pull ya skin back so u could look Apealing, guess im like a crack-head cuz stab'ing you give me that satifiying feeling
-Ya days up like calender on the ceiling Didnt understand that no punch or personal 1/5
i hate being the bully but you like benzino but its glad to see, that your blood is the flavor to this source magazin
-Again no punch personal or anything pertaining to him except for hes like benzino 2/5

Total:didnt bother

Vote:Rai$ed

Rai$ed had better punches and came more consistent most of Ransum's lines were filler no real punches or personal, one attempted personal by Ransum but it didnt hit...lines were stretched and hard to read