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Old 01-13-07, 02:09 AM   #10
Paranoid
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not sure who's on which verse..

first verse is coo im def feelin the dudes swagger...his lyrics are decent. flow is pretty much on lock. ya delivery kinda chillin which is okay but you could put a lil more emotion into it but thats really okay. decent verse..quality is meh could be better.

2nd verse is decent, flows pretty coo but ya voice a lil weird soundin maybe try deliverin it a bit different i dont know. ya lyrics decent, not bad actually.

3rd verse was pretty much same as the first. word

decent track yall...im feelin the hook and the beat, it's coo

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239248
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