I pulled my hair out at his boring punches, they don't Fair well
So Prostyle is neeeded...I gotta call him to borrow the hair Ge
He was Scared my 3rd week, he no showed b4 my feat hit this geek
I'm not talkin violent mexicans when I say His-Panic beat 'em that week
His Old screen name's Vlad, watch my slugz pop his brain a loose
So when I throw V-8? I gurantee I'm not tossin tomato Juice

vs



ur broke ass couldnt vacate the states n visit attractive dimes
if u ever join sum cruise,it'll be the 1's that arent active online

pro this wasnt too good of a verse 4 you, the concepts werent effective enough
you need more creativity in ya verse but keep working on your wording and you be good
tef you had a good verse i dug it ebough to give you the vote
v/ tef

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