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Old 01-13-07, 05:59 PM   #11
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
Posts: 7,487
From: East Coast
IP:

U've sucked for awhile, gettin' a new beginnin' is vital
Ur the league's John Stockton...
... u've been around FOREVER without winnin' a title
Ur 0-3 in champ matches, I'll be hurtin' this dude
The title Haunts u so much, Disney's mansion would be PERFECT for u


vs

This false shit you spit givin me anger,so lemme show wat real skill do
if DaTrusHurtz dogg, then what lies in my chamber will fucking kill you
No styles scrub,all your damn clothes juss reak of doom
and you pants like Cinderella stayin home, no ballroom

both you had decent verses, these i quoted from both i liked, and the ones i didnt were because they slightly missed like sonnys dirt bar wouldve been hot, the trus with the get rid of the slashes line was ok as well
overal i got it tied quotable wise so based on what style i like more and cuz he was a bit more crisp i got trus taking this slimly
v/ trus
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