You gotta know who owns you when you write lines
its not unselfish concern.. in verses you just like your selfless than you like mine
I've meant to ask how your inflated record is meant to last...
talking about you being good is always exciting... intense is past...

vs.

Fucking loser, he got no Friends..........believe me
He'll make Monica and Rachel stop hanging with Feebie
When I retire you...get no benefits, bet it happen
Cuz pension describes the weapon...AND the spot U getting stabbed in
Aint you like forty-nine? bitch I'll fucking leave your jaw behind
And put you in chairs...faster than Nick Fletcher storylines


this was a cool read. feebles opener didn't work for me. his 'selfless' line was hot, and while the 'past tense' line read a bit awkward i still liked it. the rest of his verse was a bit listless tho. taverez had the 'feebie' nameplay which was the punch of the battle definitely, and i felt he was more consistent so i've got him taking this one.


v/ n.taverez.