I dunno...

...i mean i felt the 'content' of this piece..(er, not pun intended)...but then i felt the 'chains' linking the some of if together, to give it a better flow weren't as strong as they could/should be...

...i mean there's subtle, whcih is all well and good...there was quite a few 'subtle' yet strong chains in this piece...but also some which were not too strong..

....it had great persoinal depth to it....so much so that i didn't understand all of it...and maybe got more of a personal meaning of my own, than yours...

...very raw, and 'on the edge'....which is rare to see...and i felt it was finsihed well....with the overall exection being very good...

...so overall, this a very, very good piece in my opinion..but SOME of the weak 'chains' which ended up disrupting SOME of the flow, meant i couldn't call it brilliant, but that's on a PERSONAL level of my own...cos i can see it has a personal depth to it (of yours) that makes it brilliant on the writers (that's you) level...


...respect...