You're a fucking loser & thats why I make it clear when flowing
I'm never taking back words... like the direction your text career is going...
You gotta know who owns you when you write lines
its not unselfish concern.. in verses you just like your selfless than you like mine
u winning? you're trash which is why I wonder how to contort his hunches
I dont want to force the issue.. I mean Ive witnessed how u force ur punches

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Go back to ya site, cuz here on RV you been thru
Be proud to champ a league more people sign OUt then Into
Fucking loser, he got no Friends..........believe me
He'll make Monica and Rachel stop hanging with Feebie
When I retire you...get no benefits, bet it happen
Cuz pension describes the weapon...AND the spot U getting stabbed in
And relationships this geek should prevent it
Funny how your names Mind but its your girls brains that keeps our attention

I got N.Tav taking this on more creative n entertaining lines...His verse also made more sense and was more consistant as well. Feebs came in tight but lost steam as he whent by...some of his shit didn't make sense or just str8 out wasn't a punch at all making it hard to quote. His opener and 2nd bar were both tight though, He would have had a better chance of getting my vote if he would have stayed consistant after these lines though.

V/ N. Tavarez

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..