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Old 01-14-07, 11:03 AM   #22
DaTrusHurtz
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Okay, I'm gonna reverse Tony's vote. He quoted more lines from Comedian and his explanation indicated that he liked Comedian's verse better. It seems he just made a mistake and put the wrong name.

About the biting accusation, its very close, no doubt about that, but Comedian has never been accused of biting, and also that concept isn't really a very hard one to think of. Its pretty conceivable that someone could have thought of the same concept that way so I'm gonna let it slide.

Given all this, this battle is 5-5 and I'm going to cast the tie-breaker vote.

even if shady signed u, your rhymes would never get off the shelf..
cuz i'll make ur blood flow thru more creekwater then bobby himself
i'll pound your abdominals, work punches to the mid-section..
and smash inner-com
.... so much principals can no longer announce detentions

vs.

i'm carrying heat but use knives on you because it's shorter
Cocaine lives life on the edge... and I'm known for cutting corners
you saw Brokeback & want to spend life in bed with some queers
and you're coming in las'so just grab the fucking rest of your gear

This battle was real close and I can see why the voting is tied, I got quotables tied myself. Really just comes down to style here. Cocaine, I feel like you have too many statementish lines. Your verses are very indirect at getting to the opponent. Comedian, you gotta work on your creativity n' coming more fresh. You never have lines which are that bad, but little stands out so work on making them stand out more with some creativity. Cuz of the consistency, I gotta go with Comedian here.

Vote - Comedian
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