Aiight this beat sound amatuer, but good good vibe

intro nice..

yea, singer sound young, but she def got lot of potential. Overall it was pretty coo.

First verse, flow pretty nice. Like the emotion you putting into it. Can tell you really putting your all to it. flow went off on some lines, not too much tho. But uhh lyrics nice.

hook pretty catchy, lol you singin' adlib? lool haha


second verse, word @ "when i'm feelin' angered I use the mic as a weapon". singer part on verse was def good idea. mixin' better could help her sound out soo much. sound too hollow, if that makes sense.

third verse, flow started weird i thought, but nice multi's. Flow got better as it go on. lol you sound like Tonyself a bit. pronounciation could be tad bit better, overall nice verse too.

hook again, really growing on me man. liked it. mixin' was only thing bad on it.

Overall, man really ncie track. Real nice emotional track. Def was feelin' this man. first time hearing you too. Nice shit man. f'real 8.8/10


EZ

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