emotion and delivery is nice, thats what i def like about ur ish......

no prob with flow....on point, no fall offs that i could sense........
chorus, i like the lil bit of the transition there

good mic quality......

good concept.....

beat is very fit for this and ur approach matched it

overall this shyt is real coo, its real hip hop.....props for keepin it original and keepin the hip hop essence alive

*nods*