ok ok...beat is crazy........

id say turn up the vocals a bit, lovin the emotion on this and the energy, good flow ur hangin with it well.....
like the chorus......really ridin the beat
2nd verse....got a lil versatile...more of a twista flow now, u changed it from fast and slowed it a lil, likes

overall id say my only thing with this is turn up the vocals, i know ur usin a comp mic, but ur makin it work, it aint that bad u just gotta turn it up cuz the bass from the beat is kinda absorbin ur verses

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