yea i can sense u were in a deep mindset here......as for ur verse, in my eyes flow stood out here the most, althought the content was enjoyable, nothin really stood out like wow, the son yall with the hand line was kinda funny tho.......but it does seem like u took the Nas approach here
do i give a fuck if its a remix *shrugs*.....i just wanted to see what u were about and i see....*nods* keep writin my man......i did text for like a year before i decided to do audio......then said fuck it, its dumb.....then got back into it cuz the sites text section here sucks, not to mention theres alot of white people here critiquin pieces (not that aint nothin wrong with that, but heh talk about 25 cats with the same flow and no difference in charisma or swagga)

structure was ok.....like i said flow was the best thing that stood out, most of it was sorta generic, but thats good u got to that level after bein inspired