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Old 01-17-07, 09:28 AM   #14
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im an audio head now....still do text but i come in cuz i neglect where i came from

ok seems to me like ur in a deep mode right now soooooo

I'm the "ESSENCE OF ROCKS GOING THROUGH WINDOWS AND SHATTERING"//
the "MESSAGE FROM GOD SHOWING YOU KINFOLKS ARE BATTLING"//
(ok)
I've been low with savages, originated from the "GARDEN OF EDEN"//
I was "SCARRED AND LEFT BLEEDING" traveled the 'FARTHEST OF REGIONS"//
(ok)
to "BARDER WITH DEMONS" for a lost soul, which is "PART OF THE REASON"//
I stopped after I "STARTED BELIEVING" because I could only be a "MARTYR TO HEATHENS"//
(i liked that last line....that was a good reversal right there, good multis so far)
a Father? didn't need him, I was left "ALONE IN BARS"//
a "HOME FOR SCARS" on the "road to success" but someone "STOLE THE CAR"//
(hehe ok...coo play)
so a lonely heart was left "COLD INSIDE" no one to "CONSOLE MY MIND"//
tears "FLOWED TILL DRIED" so there's no hope, had to cope with a "SOUL THAT DIED"//
(k)
and I'd float in the notes "COMPOSERS WRITE"//
the epitome of my epiphanies was the symphony of tears with "HOPES TO TRY"//
(like the multis in here and flow in these two)
but misery's cloaked in pride so that's the "SIDE YOU COULDNT SEE"//
attached and "APPLIED TO CROOKED GREED" but I'd "HIDE WITH BOOKS AND READ"//
(k....coo shyt)
confined a crook in me to "FIND KNOWLEDGE",cant get "INSIDE COLLEGE"//
so you try to look for the signs of god with "BLIND OPTICS"//
(k....not bad , kinda nice)
and my prayers are worthless, have you "TRIED TALKING"//
to God in "RHYMES OFTEN" but he never could "PROVIDE SOLACE"//
(coo shyt)
but besides all this, honestly, I couldn't "TAKE TO THE DRUGS"//
to "GAPE WOUNDS AND CUTS" but they wouldn't be there if I hadn't tried to "REPLACE TRUTH FOR LOVE"//
(multis were kinda eh here...seemed a lil forced with the rhymin and all.....)

all in all deep piece, im def feelin the content/subject matter here.......this is more of a spoken word piece so if u ever convert this to audio....just make it one of those beats where theres nothin too hard but its like just somethin u can chill too and let this piece out
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