this piece had real good sense of reality to it i could tell it came from ur heart
flow was good it didnt really go off balance anywhere but was kinda simple
not saying im better or nuthin but im just giving you some constructive critism
ur words were kinda basic too but they gave it meaning and emotion
overall i say u just gotta work on the complexity of your rhymes but i like this
i enjoyed reading it so keep dropping and make sure u got some links now
YES theres actually mods in this forum now lol..me and willa
and im not gonna give this any grade cuz its better off just being explained so pc

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