first off im gonna start off wit the positive cuz every person deserves ta hear both the good and the bad bout their music. your flow was good i felt like it could go to a beat and it went together very good. ur lyrics were beyond basic but werent all oohs and ahhs lol so work on that a lil more but overall ur lyrics were decent. now for the kinda down part bout it. u gotta make people FEEL and RELATE to ur music u cant just be like "muthafucka ima blow you away im a gangsta u hoes just gay" cuz first off gangsta music is straight up played out, no creativity, and is just shit people dont wanna really hear. i feel like u can be realer get in touch with ur true emotions. anyways this was decent so keep dropping just work on what you got to say and make sure u always got links in every drop

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