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Good shtuff as alwase valor.....the topic was tight but i felt tword the end of the poem you started to force your rhyme
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Example:
a poet i am, creating music
poetry is fun
which is why i choose not to abuse it..
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it really sounded like you were trying to hard to find a decent ending...next time just dont force it...but yeah a dope drop either way
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best part:
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poetry is my friend
failure i'll never admit
for my words and writing
is which i speak through
there's nothing to be hiding
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