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Old 01-19-07, 04:21 PM   #5
Lyriclesolja
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good shit man...sounds like you like the dark shit....the only real peice of advice i have for you is that you dont have to double space to make it look bigger....try on the other hand to make it longer lol you kinda left the reader hanging....
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Originally Posted by Indeph
Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
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