New to RV
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IP:
pretty simple structure to this but kept me reading
coulda done with some more original bragging material, instead of the taking the crown, im on top etc
white person to go down in black history was sick, more of that woulda made this iller
pretty simple rhyming too, could use some more multies and whatnot to speed the drop up
play with your complexity and scheme
anyways keep at it
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