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Old 01-20-07, 12:22 PM   #9
efgeesus
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pretty simple structure to this but kept me reading

coulda done with some more original bragging material, instead of the taking the crown, im on top etc
white person to go down in black history was sick, more of that woulda made this iller
pretty simple rhyming too, could use some more multies and whatnot to speed the drop up

play with your complexity and scheme

anyways keep at it
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