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lol, great feedback :/
anyway Willa kinda summed this up
i thought the flow was the strength to this drop, multies came and went
the content i wasn't feeling a great deal, wasn't any standout lines but you kept the verse rolling with the flow
seemed you were tryin to squeeze some extra rhymes in there to, which messed with the grammar a bit
stay on it
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