this was a nice feel in it with your emo dark as wanting and liking shit liek that lmfao.. but yea man you had some nice wording aswell but a hint with lyrical is that your double space shit is irritating man....make it though a bit longer aswell unless your got a very deep and nice wording that you can suma whole story with a nice wording and grammar stature in a few lines then by all means do it!...but yea nice dorp man!.

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