okay hook needed...somethin simple like

P (wit dubs) :: pause:: R (dubbed again)
^ that x3
and the fourth line somethin like
"Prah'ject bitch im up up out cha radar"

cuz then even the hook line starts with p ends with r, then you go from the p verse to the r verse....you can get more creative with that last line, but with your hype n all that hook would be bananas....n keep the talking and send it down 3db';s then you got a crack song, right now its just some crack foundation....finish it off boy......do what you do tho, good shit

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