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Old 01-25-07, 05:42 PM   #5
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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Beat is ok kind fo repetative ammatuerish.
I like the first guys style flow is really nice delivery is nice
The part where he went silent was gay but ti made sense i guess
Lyrics were overall good but some parts wer sacraficed for flow

second guy flow Voice is alot better flow isnt as nice as the first guy lyrics werent as nice either. simple like a pimple that was extremely wack lol his ending wasnt as nice as the last guy

third guy his voice is like hes almost out of breathlyrics were cool. Dont know why you didnt do the ending thing like everyone else would have made the track alot better

overall 7/10
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