I champed YOUR LBL and 1-2, bet you cant believe it son
So call me wack.... and it'll speak for both leagues you run

vs...

Nelson, don't brag on the 1-2, its closed n' downed son
Say Bye to the league...
... actually knocked you out of round 1
Always phonin' ur D/R, I'll hit u where ya hurtin'
Ur known to tie up the line...
... add played wordplay, and fuck up the wording

neither verse was that great, but neither were that weak either. i think tavarez was more personal, which i liked. i felt he had trouble executing alot of his punches though, or atleast forced them somewhat. dth, your opener had me thinking you were going to take this for sure, but you never really had anything harsh again until the 'tie up the line', which i've seen before. you had a couple flipped concepts, so for orginality ill vote - tavarez.