Beat : this beat grabbed my attention... good beat choice....
intro hook... eh... i gotta most deff tell you that its improved 10 fold...
Verse... your style is coming off the most fluid i think ive heard you.
Production.... on that last outro hook i see you upped your game by adding some sound effects over the vocals there... you can most deff tell your uppin ya game.... now... some things to work on.... a more complicated rhyme scheme.... your still kinda locked into the cat/ hat/... mad/sad rhyme pattern.... if you keep with this elevation that should all change in the near future... This was with out question in my opinion your best work
Keep Elevatin P
RTF on my track : WAKE UP
-Don Tito Bronsky