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Old 01-27-07, 03:46 AM   #2
Tha .Q
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When the hook 1st comes in, it's too heavy...That's something I have to watch at times...It's like, you know what the hook says because you wrote it. But, for everyone else, they need a short period of adjustment before the hook "sets in"...So, maybe prepare us for the unexpected entry by ad libbin the intro more...Also, I felt your hook should have been panned more left and write...It sounded too center heavy

Otherwise...I like the sound of it


Beat is good

Your voice/flow/delivery are all ample and solid

Try to throw some in some rhyme scheme switch ups...

The "If u knew wut I knew u'd love me" line was potent!


Solid track.



P.S. Your lips are still very juicy!





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