I'm Talented.Period.
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When the hook 1st comes in, it's too heavy...That's something I have to watch at times...It's like, you know what the hook says because you wrote it. But, for everyone else, they need a short period of adjustment before the hook "sets in"...So, maybe prepare us for the unexpected entry by ad libbin the intro more...Also, I felt your hook should have been panned more left and write...It sounded too center heavy
Otherwise...I like the sound of it
Beat is good
Your voice/flow/delivery are all ample and solid
Try to throw some in some rhyme scheme switch ups...
The "If u knew wut I knew u'd love me" line was potent!
Solid track.
P.S. Your lips are still very juicy!
lol
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