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Old 01-27-07, 12:54 PM   #3
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Listenin'...

"They be sayin I can't do it after I dun DID IT!"...that was hard..

beat was nice..youre flow and multis are hot...shit wud be a hot banger...I like ya delivery on this but you cuda had a madder delivery on this..but that's all good this is still hot...hook is a lil heavy..but that's fine wit me, the verse shuda been a lil more heavy nah mean..maybe dubbs be heavy nah mean...cos that wud be hot.."my fuckin' t-shirt is worth more than ure jeans jerk"..I feel this right here..."what im sellin ain't milk, but im rollin' in milk", I like the transitions to the hooks, which btw is catchy but you shuda done adlibs in there like OH'S nah mean...I like the 3rd verse multis are hot, "easier to hate, than to do something gr8" niceee "suck my nuts till they ballin like jim jones" rofl..this is hot...mixtape shit...dolla at me
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