ight man, listening

liked the concept. thought maybe the set-up at the intro where you explain what you were gonna do was almost like giving away the secret, or maybe spoke too much about it. gotta leave a little something on the table to keep that curiosity and anticipation in there. the beat choice, i like the beat, but being that someone already spit on this beat for a letter track like this, it makes yours sound lke a copy. a diff beat woulda made it sound like a more original concept. the P's are nice, came in with high energy but i wish there was more words with P in there. started off heavy but thinned out as the verse went on like you ran out of steam as the verse went on. there's a lot, but it's not like every word, or every other word, its like a few per sentence where possibe. the R's yeah shoulda had even more R's in there, there was less than there was the P's. R's a heavy letter to hear emphasis on so you really coulda kicked it up evtra hard on the annunciation so people pick it up without searching for it. The rhymes in both verses was hot i just wish there was more of what your focus was. the ender on the second verse was a nice way to go out

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