I do not relate, Dayton OH. Must be a lot tougher on a guy there... The writing was done pretty well. I can't imagine speaking of my brother rotting against a door. That must have taken a lot of personal strength to post. Keep up the good struggle my man!

"I found that bastard i killed his lazy ass and found some where to smoke my fine grass, i smoked to my brotha rest in peace, i know ur up there lookin down with my neace..."

Why not better mach "lazy ass" and "fine grass"
I don't know, let's say... crazy grass. or, supine ass. There, that rocks the spot.