Listenin'...

Like the phone filter intro..Hook is ugly to me I hate it, sounds really off...no hate, you still got that baby rhymescheme like dat dat dat/ rat rat rat, it's too amateur but youre emotion is gettin alot better good to see you doing dubbs and adlibs...lyrics below average...Iunno what you tried with this song but I hate this hook no hate, you're confidence is alot better that was good...n flow is alot more str8..the rest keep working on...1 no hate

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