okay not feeling the intro...hmmm ya quality has improved since I last heard you....ya verse u open weak....when u start a verse u wanna capture the listeners attention right away....I cant lie I jus coasted thru til ya hook on verse 1 u were technically sound but ya REALLY!!!! lack presence, hook same prob I was 4 bars in before I even realized it was hook....damn I am having trouble feeding this song cuz I jus is not holding my attention....yes you flowed properly, ya delivery was good....but u lack that swag, charisma, presence, conviction...to keep anyone interested...to sum up this song it was technically solid but boring, IMO has no replay value....u really need to focus on ya showmanship an liven ya raps up man...decent track son but def needs alot of touching up....no hate jus realness.....1

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