hook is cool flows well pretty melodic
this guy is cool like his flow but doesnt fit the beat his lil flip on liek the hook was ok i think he lost the melody though ending was homo
your voice doesnt even fit the beat or match his you sound out of place you need to add some bass to your vocals and turn them up a little beat lyrically you were ok
i didnt really like it but decent track def not your best shit

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